Good morning my fellow bloggers,
we are trying to change a story from 3rd person to 1st person. we had to
- Brainstrom a fairytale from a partiualar characters point of view eg.
- Make a note of the types of pronouns’ (I,we,me,my,our) you will need to use
- Add main events from your character view number in order (this will be the order/ sequence you write story in)
- Try writing first paraghraph- Here is my exaple
First paragraph
Once upon a time, a girl was lost in the woods. A girl who was only 12 years old, her name was Goldilocks, was stumbling through the woods. In search of a warm location to spend the night, she was browsing around. All of a sudden she noticed a small home in the woods; she snuck up to it, but no one was there. She went to see if the door or whatever else was open to enter the house. The door then opened as Goldilocks did so then she went inside the house where there was 3 bowls of hot porridge sitting on the table with no one home to eat the porridge
Middle
Goldilocks went upstairs to the room with 3 beds 1 bed was very big it was mummy bears bed it wa nice and soft with a cozy blanket and pillow. Then she saw another bed that was like a race car so goldilocks run over to the bed and she jumped on it and she played on it. BUT THEN SHE SAW THE BIGGEST BED, it was daddy bears bed it was so big that it could fit 50 people on there, So again she run to the other bed and jumped and played on it and, all the beds were all messed up and dirty. Then goldilocks got hungry and went down stairs to the warm and yummy porridge. So she went to the smallest bowl that belonged to baby bear and she swallowed all of the porridge down in one go. So she went to the next 2 bowl of porridge and ate it all.
END
Then goldilocks got tired and full from all of the food and so she went upstairs to sleep in baby bears bed. Goldilocks had a pretty long nap Then she heard a voice down stairs and it was the 3 bears so goldilocks got up as quick as she can and run out of the house and the 3 bears came back home mad.
